Hush... Be quiet,
You may see him
Be very quiet
Eyes alert
Tiptoe down the path
Of magical mystery
Where star dust settles
On all converts
Your heart must be full of love
To see him sitting there
On a stem of the wild clover
Illuminating his presence
But his aura everywhere
His majestic throne
Made from natures gift
He doesn’t care much for gold
It’s the love in your heart
That pleases him
For he sees it without being told
To perceive the elf and these wondrous things
To the tune of fairies dancing
With butterfly wings
The blue birds sing in unison
Whilst the old hedgehog smiles and winks
Is this really just imagination
Now tell me... what do you think.
Can you see him ?
Ha ..I knew you would
For I know you are
very...very good.
Author notes
Written July 9th, 2006
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awesome
Wow this was a lovely poem. It really made me belive that I was looking for some one. I think I am going to read more of your poems!!!!You seem to be a great writter, I would love for you to write many more! -
Oh I knew you would see him too darling, you proved that your heart is full of love with your last poem
Love you much Paige
Nanna Barbara
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That was very good Nanna Barbara, i can see him to!! He is very magical and happy!
I love these types of poems because i find them very true and real! Well done Nanna
and keep writing more poems! great job..
lots of love
princess paige 
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terrific
What a very imaginative poem dear Barb. A truly wonderfully written childrens poem full of your usual illustrative style that makes you so unque. Especially when you are writing your inspiring childrens' poems. You are quite a talent and it is only getting better and better with each poem. God Bless--- -
Of cause you saw him sweetie....your heart is full of love..
lOVE YOU TOO ELLIE
Nanna Barbara
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I see him !! I see him !! yay He is magical with a magical heart ♥ and I see the old hedgehog smiling and winking
magical nice imagery.. I ♥ imagination in poems
lots of love
ellie
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Hello mummy of my grand daughter
Yes I totally agree, they do grow up very fast.
I think I like writing for children best...perhaps I am still a child at heart...I hope so
Thank you for your lovely comment
Babs
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That was lovely Libra, writing poetry for the children is beautiful, it's important they don't grow up to quickly and that they can still believe in magic!
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