Inside I tear myself
apart, Writhing in the
darkness
Losing pieces of myself to you.
This shattered mind,
This worn out soul is
screaming in pain and
in love, twisting , tearing....Crying.
And yet the obvious
signs are ignored, you
fall into a false
comfort,
All the time ignoring
what is felt on the
inside......And what i feel for you.
And before i lose
myself to the
darkness, i see
the saving light,
flicker and die....just like me.
Author notes
this peom was written a while back when i was going through a particularly bad time in my life and in my head but even still its one of my favourite ones that i have written....just don't read it when your depressed
Written May 7th, 2006
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this is really good!
i love the writing in the darkness bit, its a really good image and i can really relate to it, the whole sitting in the dark thing.
excellent!
wuhaay!
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really good, lots of potent imagerey used. i applaud you sir.
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Wow. I never read this one. It's really your kind of poem, but it's lovely in a really dark way.
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dark but teriffic write!
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again..thanks
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Woah! your quite the romantic in a kind of twisted, screwed up romance kind of way and that's a compliment.
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I like this one, It captivates the readers .. this one has true beauty.. keep writing
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