Looking into your eyes,
Through forever, I see
Hazel ongoing circles of eternity
A look of loneliness,
Upon your brow
Take my hand, come to nature…
Your body is a holy temple.
Starlit Fields to consume your love,
Devour your perfection
Bury it deep inside it’s own faults.
You fill the void of purity for this world…
I’m lost in a natural you.
These stars have nested within
Your Eyes, a hardened heart.
If I could chisel your pain away
I would take each marble shaving
Melt them all to nothing…
Open clearings of Golden Wheat,
To sow your seed
My emotion, a fertilizer.
Grand land, your unexpected gift.
Make my season long and hard.
Whatever I shall sow,
Reap the harvest with me.
Relax, restfully lay beside my weariness.
Comfort me.
I want to make you my wild horse
Ride you bareback in the hills.
I’d watch as your belly bends
And bows beneath me.
I would scatter your calico children,
Across these many nations.
And paint my deepest secrets,
On your strong sides, dear stallion
Carry them throughout your world
Tell none, out your mouth.
I’d whisper the words of Jesus
So the animals would know
Their Salvation, his compromise.
I’d brush your mane,
Long and shining brown
the planets favorite color.
Gorgeous in the sunrise
Twirling in the rustling wind.
I’d feed you fruits of mother Earth…
Give care until your hooves
Wear out from many gallops.
Possessing you,
Completely loving every inch of you
Or passionately taking a trip inside
Your flesh, would ignite
A wildfire blazing across
a wayward savanna.
I desperately want that fire,
Spreading in a blink of an eye.
Faster, and faster
I want you to scorch me,
Set my desire on flames as well.
The night would heat, boil over
Crisp our lusts, sweating together
Glistening in the candles glare
Such brilliant fire
Would burn even the sun.
How the tides would roll,
On your calm, undefined beach.
It resembles a wishful motion,
Push and pull of your sea
The feel of your many moves
How you would feel inside me…
I want you to be the water
That soothes my aching physique…
The magnificent power
Washing my burdens free.
If I stand next to your ocean,
I feel so small, insignificant
I surrender to you…
I beg you with all my might,
Please chain me up.
Torture me with all your instruments of pain.
Strike me down, I’ll surrender.
You alone have power in my world.
You make the ice sickles in downy oaks
The always-changing winter chills…
You freeze my love, saving my excitement
And spill my wonder across
The firmness of your chest…
You can be my shaded tree,
Take the heat from my head
Weight from my feet.
My candle in the darkness
Leading to safe paths.
Guiding through the darkness of Midnight.
You’re the breath of air when I’m drowning…
You’re the voice to wake my slumber,
A language of holiness
The demons nearing creep away
Words of my mighty man
You become the sharpened edge of my sword
When I battle the evil of hard times.
You become my intelligence,
When streets come into play.
The mud and the blood, the past
You would be my satisfactory craving
Leaving my thirst more unquenchable.
Then again, you are my crystal clear water.
You keep me coming back for more
My lovers’ body keeps me strong…
Skin to touch, hair to smell
Your savory kiss lingers on my tongue
Like slow, warm honey from a hive.
I know few of your tastes,
How it leaves me wondering about
The other delectable flavors…
When will I receive those delights?
When will time stall for us?
A night together of pure fantasy…
Our twisting limbs, entwining as one.
Moaning, a song in the wind
I want father time to die
Shrivel up and rot
The madness of not having you
Kills me inside
I’d like to devour you
Hold you through the storm,
Slip off to an Earthly heaven.
Have you forever and a day
You’re my greatest challenge
A mountain that cannot be conquered…
You are… my living world.
Author notes
Written July 9th, 2006
A contest entry
- how many times can i break till i shatter. by innocence jaded.xx.
900 points, ended December 3, 2008, 57 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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-Possessing you,
Completely loving every inch of you
Or passionately taking a trip inside
Your flesh, would ignite
A wildfire blazing across
a wayward savanna.
you've got talent. incredible imagery.
welcome to the finalists♥

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Such a wonderful and beautifully written poem.
A lot of passion and vivid imagery throughout.
I really enjoyed reading this!
Thank you for sharing this with me!
Allen0826 -
Excellent
Beautiful, well writen imagery and emotions. Very well done.
love,
Clautje -
W00Ternany!
This poem bent my empathy feelers.. More like tied them into knots.. lol.. Astounding descriptions and very heart felt.. -
this is a wonderful poem with lots of passion, but it is very very lengthy too which makes people lose interest some times. Trust me. I lose interest if the poem is too long, but it is good and I would not change a thing. You are lucky you can write about love. I can not, but then again I am also the dateless wonder. I wish you the best of luck
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Have you forever and a day
You’re my greatest challenge
A mountain that cannot be conquered…
You are… my living world.
Just an amazing journey of the heartfelt sentiments from the begining and making so intrigue and so thought provoking as well..A universal way to express the love indeed...
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This is so amaising. wow is all I can say. You are an amaising poet. I am so glad that you posted this.
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