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life

Stuck inside
This thing called life
A miserable girl
Who can do nothing right

Voices talk
And fingers point
At the broken someone
They think they won

She’s been broken down
And abused
Lied to
And used

She forces a smile
Tries to hide the pain
Of all the scars
Left on her vein

A depressed no one
Cuts
To hide the pain
Leaving markings in her vein

Looks up at the sky
And starts to cry


I say I want to be wanted
But now I must die

Goes home that night
And end my life
With a blade to the wrist
Of a girl who wont be missed

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Written July 9th, 2006

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  • OurxBeginning
    July 10, 2006
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    Aww this is really sad and emotional. It's a little cliche but still powerful. I can picture some of this in my mind. Your emotion is very evident. Thanks for entering and good luck.

    ~Midnight~


  • allaboutpoetry
    July 9, 2006
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    great poem.it is very deep and emotional.