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black heart

A little girl
Whose all alone
No friends
And no one at home

Cries herself to sleep
Every night
Dreading the next day
Afraid of the fight

She is far from perfect
And her mom agrees
Every day the little girl
Just wants her spirit to be free

She’s liked by few
And hated my many
Friends with no one new
And made fun of by plenty

She wears the same clothes
Day after day
Wants the pain to go away
But more comes to stay

She don’t want to put up
A fight
So this is the end
Tonight

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Written July 9th, 2006

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  • OurxBeginning
    July 10, 2006
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    Another sad write from you. Your words really get into my skin..because I can relate to the girl a lot. Nice rhyming and emotional, just as the last one. If these writes are about you, feel free to IM, I'll be more than welcome to try to help you in anyway. Thanks for entering and good luck.

    ~Midnight~