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Talking Leaves

whispers sip round the moon
centuries sing  of memories
The land is  walking with us
civilizations shall shiver
Sequoya, bright sight, shines light   

Cherokee on a war-path of
talking leaves,wind rustled words
drop toward trails of tears  
symbols of sounds remembers
Phoenix flew our leaf westward  

Author notes

Sequoya,a  Cherokee warrior invented the Cherokee written alphabet to record and preserve their culture. There were 86 symbols for sounds "called the talking leaves" they were used in their newspaper the Cherokee Phoenix. The Cherokee Nation sued the United States and won in the Supreme Court, then the "trail of tears" as they illeally were moved from their homes made of bricks and logs. The Cherokee tribes of Georgia were highly educated people with a well structured society and religion. Sorry if this is a small leaf floating to the ground, to others.
Written July 8th, 2006

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  • shubs
    March 1
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    Sublime

    Historically significant with your innate touch this poem sings a lot about the glory that was to the present.Great words with great images and feelings reach me even as I am able to empathise with the gist of this...God Bless you..Shubs

    Can you please change the spelling to "civilisations"

    in civilazations shall shiver


  • Alam Shah
    August 19, 2007
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    Simply Great Stuff

    It is simply a marvellous write and I share your insight. It's nice to read your art again....~Alam


  • katina
    March 17, 2007

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    Great and inspiring images wrapped with a bow on top! A gift of beauty to all who reads. I have a lot of native heritiage in my blood, and I am very proud that I have this culture within. However, I do not live by their customs or take part in pow wows, I feel a deep rooted connection to the Native Culture and value everyitng they did for the country I live in, even if they were not treated fairly.

  • annie
    July 31, 2006
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    Hi Minto, I am not on-line much now, as my computer seems to think it owns me, instead of the other way around. I feel the smoke heavily today, with all the cruel destruction on this sacred earth. Odd to me, it seems. To think that most religions seem to call on God to protect the earth that we all live on and will all lay dead together in its hollowed ground. The earth that was divinely made, I wonder, who are we to destroy any of God's nature, including our own selves? I preach to much of late. God's Blessings on you, Annie
    Edited on Jul 31, 6:17 p.m. because 'typo'.

  • annie
    July 31, 2006
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    Rob, I thank you for reading my small history leason. The world is smug in its historical veiws. I am sure it will be rewritten again, if the earth is able to last. Gods Blessings, Annie
    Edited on Jul 31, 11:40 p.m. because 'typo'.

  • minto
    July 31, 2006
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    Ahhh to me this poem is being spoken in a smoky voice around a fire ring.your poems not only speak their own imagery, but they live within experiences of memory, and thats beautiful


  • just rob gold member
    July 29, 2006
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    Sometimes a small leaf hits the ground with the thud of robust gravity. The story of the trail, as well as many, many others should be given the weight they deserve in what pass for history classes. Tell the stories...
    Peace

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