A light bulb hangs
From the center of the ceiling
And that me friends
Is my hopeful feeling
And then there's the room
As dark as the night
The darkness is my depression
I wish the light, to be more bright
The darkness is depression
The light bulb is my hope
I don't think there will soon be
Anyway to cope
For each day that bulb
Gets a little bit dimmer
And then it will go out
To never again shimmer
Darkness will then over take me
And consume my entire soul
Following this tragedy
Soon my actions I won't control
Who knows what I might do
If I ever get the chance
I might commit suicide
For I'm lost in its trance
But for now
My light bulb is still lit
So it's lighting up
My dark room a little bit
So now I shall go sit
On the cold concrete floor
I pray to God Almighty
To have this feeling, nevermore....
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Written July 8th, 2006
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I liked it alot, I love the comparison of darkness/light to happiness/sadness I do it very often... Best metaphor in the world to me lol... A+ and thanks for the comment
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nice
So now I shall go sit
On the cold concrete floor
I pray to God Almighty
To have this feeling, nevermore....
i liked that part but god doesn't ever help me i hope he helps you...
much love
brian -
Well done
Well written, I especially liked this part.
'The darkness is my depression
I wish the light, to be more bright'
Keep it up
illusion
Edited on Jul 08, 8:21 because ''.
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