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The words you speak

The words you speak
Burry me deep
Into the dark
Of all the lies
You made me believe
You kill me slowly
With every word
So stop your talking
And get to walking
The other way
And stop making me pay
For all your hate
So lets schedule a date
For me to die
So you can leave
With out a cry

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Written July 8th, 2006

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  • July 8, 2006
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    beautiful

    this is a good poem...very good actually!keep it up


  • lyndsay
    July 8, 2006
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    wow very impressive


  • drama-queen12547
    July 8, 2006
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    Thats so dark and sad...But exactly how I feel sometimes. Great Job!