PUT YOUR BODY ON MY BODY
AND PUSH SOFTLY.
DON'T RUSH IT JUST LET
YOUR BODY TOUCH MINE BODY.
PUT YOUR HAND BETWEEN MY LEG'S
AND RUBB OIL ALL OVER MY BODY.
LET YOUR FINGER DO THE TALKING AND
YOUR BODY DO THE WALKING.
FINE YOURSELF BETWEEN THE SHEETS OF
YOUR LOVER TOUCH.
ASK FOR WET TOUCH OF THE LOTION ON
YOUR BODY AND LET WORK IT INTO YOUR
SKIN.
CLOSE YOUR EYE'S AND THINK ABOUT THE
CRAZY SEXUAL MOVEMENT THAT WE CAN DO.
HOLD YOUR ARM OUT AND LET ME KISS YOU ALL OVER
FROM YOUR HEAD DOWN TO HIP'S.
LAY ME DOWN ON THE bed AND OPEN MY LEG'S
AND COME-ON IN FOR THE RIDE.
I WANT TO FELL YOUR TOUCH ALL OVER MY BODY
EVEN BETWEEN MY BODY,MIND AND SOUL.
TOUCH ME ANY-WHERE THAT YOU WANT TO
MAKE MY BODY SHAKE WITH SWEET.
TOUCH THE WAY I WANT TO.
Author notes
IF YOU READ IT YOU WOULD WANT IT
Written July 8th, 2006
A contest entry
- Valentines day by trekkergirl.
400 points, ended January 26, 37 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Gotta say that I just loved the picture. Very sensual it is. Question though exactly why do you write in all caps? Is there a reason. A lot of people think that all caps mean that you are yelling. This is a good write. Thanks for sharing this and thanks for entering it into this contest.
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LET YOUR FINGER DO THE TALKING AND
YOUR BODY DO THE WALKING
sexy my dear very sexxxxy!! lol
jamila -
There is nothing like two bodies that touch softly and sweetly........
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very well written, i enjoyed reading this.
LAY ME DOWN ON THE bed AND OPEN MY LEG'S : is the word bed meant to be in lower case?
ang
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thank you for liking the pome and for letting
me know on i need to do on the pome
anything that you find please let me know -
it is very nice but you have a lot of mistakes. Mainly structure but some typos as well. It's good.
Keep on writing,
Nooni
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