Oh darling, you cut me deep, and became my worst fear
You deceived me, and unmercifully tore me apart
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Worthless tears mock me as they cling to my cheeks
Crimson regrets leak from my punctured, cold veins
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As I sit here and waste away into a pit of misery
All that's left of me is tainted razor blades
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I give into the lies that drip lazily from your lips
The lies that fill me with rage, turmoil, uncertainty
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Just take a look at my wrist don't you see your lies
Can't you just picture me sitting there, crying slicing open the fragile skin
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Oh, if only you could see the morbid rivers of crimson that flood the banks of my miserable wounds
Those wounds are now stitched with endless shame
•-•-•
Oh darling, you cut me deep, and became my worst fear
You deceived me and unmercifully killed me...
Author notes
Ok, this all came to me. This sux I know. Just tell me what you think please.
Written July 7th, 2006
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Thanks hun, for the wonderful comment! It's always appreciated. ttyl. Much love,
Isabel
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Beautiful
This was a great poem. I really loved it. It was filled with so much emotion. You really amazed me as always! Great poem sweetie and keep it up.
Love, Cassie -
Thanks hun, for the awesome comment as usual. lol. Much love,
Isa
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Psht. This does not suck! I liked this one. The phrases were creative and I really liked the title as well. I specifically liked this line: "Oh, if only you could see the morbid rivers of crimson that flood the banks of my miserable wounds." I thought that was a very creative comparison. Anyway, great write, keep it up ^.^
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umm..I don't know what to say honestly..anyways umm...is this the one you wrote last night? Anyways I'll see you later
Me
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wow...i like it, it definelty doesnt suck! its very good. keep up the good work!!
♥ Lacey
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