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Parents (Acrostic)

Protective

Advisers

Raising

Energetic children.

Nurturing them into

Talented

Self sufficient adults.

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Written July 7th, 2006

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  • pozo
    July 14, 2006
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    Great poem which I liked a lot Keep writing, I liked the acrostic form and this is very true
    All the best
    Thanks for your comment/analysis
    Pozo


  • Starshine on me
    July 9, 2006
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    * Blushes* Omg! Do you really think Hallmark would hire me!? lol Thanks for your wonderfull comment.
    Starshine

  • Starshine on me
    July 9, 2006
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    THanks Sidra for your comment. That is why I like doing acrostics. They can be short and staight to the point. They cans say so much with so few words.
    Starshine

  • Starshine on me
    July 9, 2006
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    Thanks for your comment neoladyem.And sometimes we don't always show our parents how much we truly appreciate them.
    Starshine

  • Starshine on me
    July 9, 2006
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    Thanks for your comment Sugar. And congradulations on becoming a mom yourself. I hope that you do well in your raising. I can see why you would choose to read poetry at such a wonderful time. And The hospital cable channels sucks. lol
    Starshine


  • Immortal Flesh
    July 8, 2006
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    oh my god you never cease to amaze me. This is absolutely perfect!
    Now I am sure that you ARE the best acrostic poet in all poetry!
    This piece should be sold in all card stores, it's that good!!!
    Nice job starshine!!! BRAVISIMO!!!


  • Sidra Sabella
    July 7, 2006
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    damn strait, and very to the point. my parents are part of what made me who i am today and i love that.its hard being a parent and they deserve alot of credit, thus your peom os awesome and i likes it very much. you said it all without saying too much.


  • neoladyem
    July 7, 2006
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    That is so true. Parents should so get more awards then they do now days. Specially my mom, she really tough to be able to handle me. Anyway, I really like this poem of yours. Espically since it's acrostic. I haven't too many on this site. You chose great words to describe what parents really are. I hope you get a lot of comments on this piece.

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