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In Darkness Forever

Can I go on?
Can I trust anyone?
Or am I stuck in Darkness
In a pitch black room
With only voices in my head
And there I sit...........
In a cold medal chair
Facing the corner
When will I be saved?
And will I ever?
And if so...by who?
Maybe it's you
No you won't save me
Because you don't care
No one does
So I guess I'll be stuck
In this darkness forever
Until I get the courage
To stop it all
And end my life
But I can't kill myself
It's just not in my blood
So I'll live in sorrow forever
Until I die....
And get buried in the ground
For that's when I'll be safe
I will know no more darkness
And know no more pain

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Written July 7th, 2006

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  • Tali28
    July 13, 2006
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    Great poem. very dark and emotional. I'm sorry for your situation. Depression can be such a hard thing to deal with. Please take care of yourself. Hold on, it will get better one day. Thank you for sharing this wonderful poem with me. Good luck in my contest. ttyl Tali