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One year on

Remember the morning
On that fateful day
People just living their lives
Walking into the station
To get on a train
Earning to have better lives

Then all of a sudden
One large blast
People crying and screaming in pain
This was the scene
In three different stations
Efforts to help were in vain

Remember the pain
The families suffered
Loosing their loved ones so dear
Then all the survivors
Who lived through the pain
Remember the dread and the fear

The passengers waiting
For their local bus
Not knowing their terribe fate
Getting onto the bus
Sitting into a seat
Unaware of the disater that waits

As the bus set off
For its next stop
There was a sudden bang
The driver just stopped
The people screamed out
As their horrible nightmare began

Remember the victims
Who lost their lives
As we remember one year on
The survivors still fear
July the seventh
Therefore we must go on as one

Author notes

This is for the victims and the families of the victims of the July the 7th attacks. remembering the people who lost their lives one year on. Hope you will tell me what you think.

This is entered under the terrorist option,(11) remembering the terror attacks on London one year later.

its marvelous >.<
Written July 7th, 2006

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  • 1-Winged-Angel
    July 21, 2006
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    thanks

  • MidnightAmethyst
    July 21, 2006
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    I enjoyed this poem, with your word choice and how it tells the story of the terrorism. It was done very well.

  • MidnightAmethyst
    July 8, 2006
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    Please read the rules and put your option # into your author's comment box!


  • 1-Winged-Angel
    July 8, 2006
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    Don't worry about it. I'm english myself so I do feel strongly about it


  • lovelustre
    July 8, 2006
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    thankyou for the expressive tribute.

  • 1-Winged-Angel
    July 7, 2006
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    thanks . I'm glad you like it. I'm back for a while now, no exams to worry about or even university for 3 months , and yeah, i know someone who was in london on the day of the bombings. He was lucky enough to be unscathed from it though. Thanks for commenting I really appreciate it

    Libbi <3


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    July 7, 2006
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    wow, it is good to see you have returned for a while i mean wow this is a very golden tribuate or memorial for the ppl the victims, you have a great pen to match that heart, keep it flowing

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