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Two Thoughts of the Day



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I don't want to miss
This exciting romance dance
The one manifesting in this moment
The one manifesting in this life time
Please don't let me be lost
In endless searching
For what is given so freely every day
Let me dance to the music
Serenading within me;
Laugh, as only the heart can.




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I never can stay
With the perfection of this world
I'll always be chasing
That one more glass,
One more toke;
One more buck;
One more dream

...But that perfection within;
When I go there
It satisfies
Completely

Oh Mind
You love this world
Of thrills and chills
Oh Heart
How you adore the inner world
Of peace and tranquility





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One day...many thoughts.
Written July 7th, 2006

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  • Just4u
    July 20, 2006
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    Mind analysis where heart accepts -Eddy


  • Sau
    July 17, 2006
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    Positive and Uplifting!


  • Presence
    July 11, 2006
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    Miss the dance? Oh, my Friend! You ARE the dance!! Like a wondrous melody - Your loving words come to us and we are moving to the rythm of Your rhyme... we tap our fee to the cadence of Your meters... we sway softly in the gentle breeze of the poetic endeavors that pour endlessly from Your sacred pen!

    You express so well the human condition and conundrum of chasing after happiness in the experiences of the world... it sounds as if You have indeed found the peace and true thrills the reside within. May You ever be free, and know the Divine thrills of this life, my Friend!

    Now, let us dance some more!


  • Providence
    July 8, 2006
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    BEautiful Tara. Our lifes can be so peaceful, one we learn to move past our own distractions!

  • Betty Rickard
    July 7, 2006
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    Excellent

    Wonderful poem...Great message in it..Excellent write and written so very well ,as always..EXCELLENT!
    Hugs,
    Betty


  • Taranand
    July 7, 2006
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    Thanks for your welcome comments Karen. Love Tara

  • Taranand
    July 7, 2006
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    Thanks suseann for your soothing words and again to be reminded of whats so simple yet so easy to forget. Tara


  • transcendental baby gold member
    July 7, 2006
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    And what great thoughts they are too This speaks of an inner self-love and peace that is magnificent and beautiful Tara ... the way we all need to feel


  • ToltecWarrior
    July 7, 2006
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  • suseann
    July 7, 2006
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    Slow down,take a long slow breath.Close your eyes and relax.It's the only way to find what we seek. Be it peace,and or love.If you move too fast,nether one can find you.Now I've reminded you,you must in return, tell me to practice what I preach.I feel like it was me who wrote this piece.But you voiced it much better than I could have.Nice one poet!~~Suseann


  • Taranand
    July 7, 2006
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    Yes, and all through the day too, dear friend. Love ;f Tara


  • Puppydog gold member
    July 7, 2006
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    A TRULY BEAUTIFUL POEM

    We all live each day as it comes but still wish for peace and tranquillity to find us at the end of that day.

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