There once was a dictator who lived by the sea,
his inadequate missile made it difficult to pee.
One day while playing in his pockets,
he ignited five bottle rockets,
and they too would fall short as did he.
Author notes
It's the nicest thing I could say!
Written July 7th, 2006
A contest entry
- North Korea by unknownpleasure.
400 points, ended December 16, 2008, 11 entries
Silver trophy winner
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Says a lot in so few lines. Witty, fey and actually saying something - I'm just going to decide which colour trophy you win, but it will be a pretty colour. Thanks for re-entering!
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Ha ha ha. I rike this poem! But why you enter poem about US agglessor plesident George W. Bush in contest about grorious DPRK, huh? Arthough yes, we arr know he comes up short in evely department! Hee hee!
In grorious Democlatic Lepubric of Kolea we have best missires in world! Plesident Bush say wlong thing and BOOOM! Plesident Bush and his Impeliarist Amelica is no more!
That is funny! -
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you people are too funny.
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why did you withdraw this? please re-enter in the contest! you're in with a good chance...
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Ha ha I know hugh? This is a cute poem and it is light humor, but still makes a good point! No one can hang with us bro! lol
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quite entertaining--reminds more of scud missles than Korea Joe
Edited on Jul 07, 2:40 p.m. because 'typo'. -
I am glad to see it's being taken in the context which was intended. I thought it might be a little toughy for some. I meant it light hearted! Thanks again!
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very good
a short but very humorous write my freind thank you for sharing this with us is brought a smile to my face
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I was hoping it would be light enough that most could enjoy it. I'm glad you did!
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And how nicely you put it too! LOL Cute, light and a good way to start the day. Thanks for the chuckle.
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