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The way it started....but it didnt end that way

I just stood there
staring at him
didn't know what to say
what to do
if i was supposed to cry or not
all i could do was reminisce
look back at all the times we had
of when he hurt me
of when he made me happy
of everything
and then i just ran
i continued to run and run
i didn't stop
until i hit the dead end
then i just fell
and wept
i just cried
i sat in the corner
as the tears fell from my cheeks
and the blood dripped from my wrist
all i could do now is wrist for all the pain to be gone
for my life to be over
but it didn't end that way
i didn't die
and i don't know why
i guess he told me the truth
when he said he would always watch over me!!!

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My dad died less than two months ago and this is what happened to me about three weeks ago when it really hit me hard
Written July 7th, 2006

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  • The.poet.of.hearts
    February 8, 2007

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    amazing and with full of suspense and really beautiful
    i m gonna make you my favourite bcz you have alot special in your words which i like
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    the poet of hearts and beautiful words


  • cakins
    December 17, 2006

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    So sorry to hear of your loss. I feel your pain because I know what it is to loss a love one. Death came for my father but I know to be absent from the body is to be presence with the Lord.


  • queen Moderators member
    July 8, 2006
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    Im so sorry you lost your dad, sometimes grief just sneaks up on a person. I hope all is well with you Please take care