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To Have A Mistress

Beauty in the eyes of brilliance
She is everything he desires;
he is hers to do with what she sees fit
Her brilliance is worshipped each day
she breathes within his world
Nothing is more of a privilege than her presence

The beauty in her heart,
and the strength within her soul
is enough to render him speechless in awe
as he should be, for he is her slave,
and it is his honor to kiss her feet
and to receive her love and care

A woman of dominance is a gift
to a man who needs discipline
and when he knows how to treat her,
he is rewarded with bounty beyond dreams
The treasure of her flesh against his,
the gift of her lips, her caress
as brutal as it may seem

He sees inside, beyond the hardness
and that is something no other
could be important enough to see

Author notes

A mix of what I gather of Ktulu's feelings for Lady Elizabeth, and the kind of respect and honor it is to a slave/pet to have one such as this Mistress.
Written July 6th, 2006

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  • Seven Kinky
    August 12

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    Interesting how D/s relationships play out. There's so much more to it than people usually concentrate on (i.e. the sexual side). I like how you captured the feeling of the slave in this one. And I see you won silver! Well deserved, my dear.

  • Romantic

    Still felt the powerful draw of it. Well done

  • Dragonsong silver member
    May 21

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    Very special.. as a Mistress.. and a switch I know all these feelings and more. You have captured the essence of a special love, and unique lifestyle.

    Congrats on a well deserved trophy

    Naids


  • Hekate gold member
    July 16, 2006
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    awesome and deep write

  • Rose Dark Thorn gold member
    July 16, 2006
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    I'm flattered. Thank you for your comment.

  • Iohagh
    July 16, 2006
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    Darling RDT

    Ktulu is one of my friends and I added you to my favs. This is so, well, so so so cool. Smoosh

    Janet

  • Rose Dark Thorn gold member
    July 9, 2006
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    Must be wonderful for you. Thank you for your comment.

  • Erotik Rose silver member
    July 9, 2006
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    This is a wonderful poem you have written here, (he does think a lot of me and takes care of me) good luck in the contest.

  • Rose Dark Thorn gold member
    July 7, 2006
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  • Blazing White Wolf
    July 6, 2006
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    oh what a lovely write sweetie with devotion and love throught the write as brother K stated he loves it so well done honey
    Love,
    Dad

  • Rose Dark Thorn gold member
    July 6, 2006
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    Thank you for your kind words, darling, and good luck with your contest.

  • Ktulu Blackwolfe silver member
    July 6, 2006
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    Rose Dark Thorn....you have really hit exactly how I feel towards Mistress. These words are very well done, thank you very much for your entry. Best of luck to you.

    *Ktulu Blackwolfe*
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