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low

Eyes blank
Indescribably empty
Loosing myself
In the murky waters
But they are coming clear
I will be trapped
Here forever
Encased
In a self made cocoon
Of melancholy and dejection
My own protection
From the happiness
Which killed me

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fuck it all
Written July 6th, 2006

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  • HoneyBlood
    October 11, 2006
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    amazing short and sweet...and dark...
    I loved everyline! the way it has been put together is
    brilliant....and it just flows together so well...
    keep up the great work!...x~Ree~x


  • self aware
    July 11, 2006
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    Reminds me of my poem Zoloft. Very intense!


  • The FeliX
    July 6, 2006
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    short and powerful. sometimes we cant see outside the depression that enveolps us but there is always a way through in the end.
    well written
    Hollow