the teenager held his face in a confused state
he held the heavy spray can in his hand
how can he make this so it can't be rejected
but be considered beautiful
he has his share of space on the wall
but to put on there he has no idea
something describing beauty
something describing pain
something that can relate to him
and everyone else
this should not be considered illegal
but an art
an art that people should train for and practice
anger swells inside of him
for he can see
that people reject anything that a spray touches
pressure and rage take the best of him
he had to stop the prejudice towards graffiti artists
he decided to make a monument of his small town
that described it's history and the pain it met along the way
one metaphor, that's it
and people would agree that a graffiti drawing should be the next Mona Lisa
Author notes
Written July 6th, 2006
A contest entry
- points for everyone. by consarnit.
305 points, ended July 17, 2006, 16 entries
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Comments
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I love this. So well written and so true.
Very nicely done, you bring the reader in and leave them standing by his side.
Great job!

