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My Life

I fell asleep last saturday.
Underneath the darkend sky.
I walked alone and those boring nights.
And i saw the board walk start to fall.
The emptyness starts to drown
The quit corners of this town.
I laid last night and made my plans
It was the only thing I felt to could do
Said good bye to my best friend
Sometimes theres no one left to tell u the truth
Its gonna kill me the rest of my life
Let me aplogize
Why Im still alive
I know its time to face all my past mistakes
Its gonna kill me for the rest of my life
This is my all time low
Some how it feels so familiar
Somehow it seems so familiar
I feel like letting go
and every secound that goes bye
Im screaming out for a secound try.

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its gonna kill me
Written July 6th, 2006

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  • lillmissunshine
    July 31, 2006
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    lol!!!! oh ok.......have a great day!!!!!ttyl hopefully
    C♥untry chick (aka Kimberly)

  • Cody Heitzig
    July 10, 2006
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    i ment message.lol

  • lillmissunshine
    July 9, 2006
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    What do ya mean? What mess? I don't get it.
    Kim

  • sexy thing
    July 8, 2006
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    I really enjoyed this poem. I liked it a lot. Great Job!


  • Dark-whispers05
    July 7, 2006
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    tear jerker

    cody,this is good. i really couldnt help but cry when i read this...but i guess you know that b/c you were right next to me. i love you and hope you make good choices....
    love your lovely girlfriend,
    Lucious
    *mauh*

  • lillmissunshine
    July 6, 2006
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    Hey this is so good One thing Is you reapeted yourself on the line "Somehow it seems so familiar" Well may i ask Who this was written for? I'm sure whoever it was written for can see that you ment a very sinciere(sp?) aplogize !!!
    Kimberly

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