When I looked at you.....
I saw our love soar through the sky.
There were rainbow ribbons tied
around the clouds and God's
smiling eyes...
When you hugged me...
I felt so secure. I felt complete with you there.
You embraced me like a true man in love.
When you spoke to me...
Your words were as gentle as
a butterfly in flight.
They were words of caring
emotions.
Love flowed like the stream
into the river...
When I looked at you...
It was your baby blue's that
mesmerized me.
It was your gentle touch
that captured my soul.
It was you that I allowed
to let love in...
When I Looked At You...
Yvonne J. Griffin
7/6/06
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Written July 6th, 2006
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oh how sweet love can be
great poem
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Aali
Ah I’m so surprised by words.. your pure words to describe a pure love. Surely the beautifulness of love makes this true poet to talk about a true love. Yvonne I’m so surprised to keep on.
Thanks for the beautiful feeling you forgave your readers :-)
~Massy~
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Beautiful!!!
Wow, Yvonne, does certainly proves to a powerful emotion bringing out such beauty and warmth in your words. I always see the words when flow from the very depth of our hearts, are a touching poetry and always beautiful.
The love, the passion and the sweetness all smiles just like you.
Love and blessings from India - Joel - -
beautiful
This is a beautiful poem. Its so sweet and romantic. I loved it and the feeling coming from it so keep it up and im gonna have to check out some of your other work1!! great!!
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