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I don't like hospitals

I don't like hospitals
They are big and scary
and they smell funny.
They make me sad.
Why do babys have to be born in hospitals ?
I think that is mean
Why can't they be born in a nice place ?
like at home
where it is big but not scary
and it dosn't smell funny
or make me sad.
It would be happy.

I don't like hospitals
and I don't want my mama to be in hospital
She doesn't like it
I know it makes her sad
Why does she have to be in hospital ?
It's not fair
The baby won't be born for ages
but my mama is sick now
I don't want her to be scared
She doesn't like funny smells
They make her sicker
I don't want my mama to be sad

I love my mama.
I want her to be happy and the baby too.

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My mama likes daisys so I picked them as the background. When I see daisys I think of my mama and feel smiley and then Ipick some and bring them to her.
Written July 6th, 2006

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  • Ilovethesky
    August 11, 2006
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    thank you


  • Utok Bulinaw
    August 1, 2006
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    Dear Little Annie,
    This is so true about hospitals. I don't like it either. As always my dear, you write so well and this is just wonderful. Keep writing and keep smilin'. Love and hugs, Mommy Eris


  • causeless rebel
    July 8, 2006
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    I hope your mama gets better soon Annie. And I know how you feel about the hospital thing...they are quite scary...but a lot of good things happen in hospitals. For instance your mama will get healthy again, and your baby sibling will be born...along with all the other people getting healthy and the babies being born...So there are some good things that can brighten up your fear of hospitals.


  • little-hug
    July 7, 2006
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    Ohhhh Annie awww is your mama in hospital again ? I didn't know !! I hope she is ok. I will pray for her and the baby I will pray very hard I didn't used to like hospitals either but even if they are a bit scary I promise all the people there just want to make your mama feel better and protect the baby. Nurses are real kind caring people and not doctors too. They aren't scray. They are clever and nice and it's their job to make people feel better talk to you real soon lil sis
    love you lots like jelly tots
    ♥ ellie


  • LittleAnn
    July 6, 2006
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    I wish your mama all the best and that she and her baby will both be fine... I don't know: is there anyone who really likes hospitals? I don't think so! Really well written poem.
    LittleAnn


  • Krista Beth
    July 6, 2006
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    I'm sorry your mama is sick, and hope she and your baby sibling will be alright. I don't really like hospitals, either, and am not looking forward to staying there when I have my baby.
    Krista

  • thubl0ndtwin69
    July 6, 2006
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    i know the feeling of being in a hospital i was in one for 5 monthes but anyways great poem keep on keeping on hugs and

  • Sky Prince Ireland gold member
    July 6, 2006
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    I hope your mama and new sibling will be alright, Annie.
    I'll be praying for them, you and the rest of your family.
    Meanwhile great poem as always. Your writing always impresses me. God bless. Love Brian

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