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Nothing

Nothing but the futile attempts to succeed.

Nothing but the emptiness within.

Nothing but the constant dismissive derogatory remarks.

Hidden beneath a mask of smiles and normality lies the truth.
It's still there and it doesn't lie like you my child.
It will never fade nor fail.
It will never hide for long.
The memories will prevail.
But who's to say it's wrong.

It will never end. It's always there, the thoughts in the back of your mind, who's to say what's real or not. One day, my child, we'll be free and strong enough to face our secrets. Until then, nothing.

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Written July 6th, 2006

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  • XdarkXembraceX
    July 6, 2006
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    this is an amazing poem... theres so much emotion... great write