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A Little Tease

Door opens wide
He sees legs silky bare
Stretching from here
To way up there

Black satiny ripples
Caressing her thighs
Suddenly he feels
Himself start to rise

He silently wonders
What lies under her skirt
As she spreads her legs slightly
Just enough to flirt

She inches the fabric
Offering a peek
But turns around quickly
And flashes a cheek

Creamy smooth curves
A feast to his sight
He thinks to himself
This will be a delight

Dropping her skirt
She turns back around
Walks towards his bed
With a clacking sound

Standing above him
She lets out a giggle
Bends over slightly
And starts to jiggle

His eyes grow wider
He can't help but stare
Her bouncing apparent
No bra does she wear

The flimsy white cotton
Lying over her chest
Gives him a view
Of her voluptuous breasts

Deep in his mind
He's licking his lips
With thoughts of her soon
Straddling his hips

Tweaking and teasing
Each nipple in turn
His tongue flicking hard
To taste her, he yearns

He sees in his head
Her riding him hard
Staring into his eyes
With sensuous regard

And without a word
She drops all her clothes
But where this night went
Wouldn't you like to know?

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Written July 6th, 2006

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  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    August 10, 2006
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    Thank you again for your comments. I appreciate your support.

    Storm

  • Patience15
    August 10, 2006
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    ~That was such a tease but yet again another amzing erotica poem. Don't stop writing I would love to read more and more and more. Emily

  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    July 6, 2006
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    Thank you for commenting, I appreciate it.

    Now that's a thought. Getting someone else to finish what I have started. Ok, maybe that didn't sound right, lol.

    Anyway, glad you enjoyed.
    Storm

  • ckwriter69 silver member
    July 6, 2006
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    Beautifully done, I enjoyed the sensous tease. You gave us a peek and a taste, now do I wish to finish it? I think I do. Nice work on this erotic piece, thank you for sharing.

  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    July 6, 2006
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    LOL, thanks. "It" could be
  • Colin OBrien
    July 6, 2006
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    Great piece

  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    July 6, 2006
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    Hehe, I do like to tease . Thank you for reading and commenting. Glad you liked.

    Storm

  • greyhaime
    July 6, 2006
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    ohohoh.. such a tease!!!
    but I liked it. very good write!
    many blessings-
    Krystal

  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    July 6, 2006
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    Hehe, like that? Hence, the tease....

    Thanks for commenting
    Storm

  • Fairy Nutty Buddy silver member
    July 6, 2006
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    Hahaha... that was really mean! Guess I'll have to make up my own ending... Great seductive poem.

    Kimberly G.

  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    July 6, 2006
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    Thank you dear friend. Yes, I suppose each reader can finish up their own story. It just kind of popped out that way and there she sits, lol. Thanks for commenting.

    Storm

  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    July 6, 2006
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    Thank you for the comment. When I started writing this, I really wasn't heading for that finish line, but it just sort of popped in there, and I liked it, so it stayed. Appreciate your comments.

    Storm

  • goddesskevauna
    July 6, 2006
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    Oooh, damn! This is a tease! I suppose it's up to me, the reader, where I wanna take this, huh? What a delicious treat to share here. I think I'll go in for seconds here!

  • Dragonsong silver member
    July 6, 2006
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    Very nicely done! This is sensual and erotic while retaining the sense of fun that is such an intigrap part of any relationship! Well written ~Dini~
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