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How Long will I last?

I'm slipping away
Everyday I'm a little bit more gone
Soon I won't wake up
To see the next dawn

I'll die when their sleeping
So they won't hear my screams
Yes, I know how weird
This whole thing seems

But if you felt like me
You'd want to die too
I just wish I could tell someone
Someone who knew

But no one understands
The pain
They wouldn't even understand
If I tried to explain

People probably think I'm crazy
And messed up in the head
That's why I'd be better off
If I was just died

Maybe tonight will be the night
Or maybe tomorrow
Because I don't think
I can take one more day of sorrow

The pain I feel
Is way to great
I think I will soon
Need to seal my fate

I'm sick of being sad
I can't take it anymore
The depression is getting me
Right down at the core

Soon it will consume me
And my life will become worse
So please come to my funeral
And follow me in the hearse

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Written July 5th, 2006

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  • July 6, 2006
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    this is a good poem i jus hpoe thats not how your really feeling because life is to precious.
    you jus have to find something or someone who makes yo happy
    hope you feel better