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Nothing happens

Bodies come and go
Nothing happens

Sensations come and go
Nothing happens

Emotions come and go
Nothing happens

Thoughts come and go
Nothing happens

Situations come and go
Nothing happens

Beings come and go
Nothing happens

Janaka says:
Is the space concerned
by the movement of clouds?


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Written July 5th, 2006

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  • jean-marc
    July 14, 2006
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    yes, exactly, being acted instead of acting, being spoken instead of speaking, and being written instead of writing. a sincere thank you for your kind applause.


  • ma belle
    July 14, 2006
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    I am learning 'not to be moved' by nature's forces but rather let nature's forces be moved by me.


  • maa gold member
    July 9, 2006
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  • jean-marc
    July 7, 2006
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  • joyful
    July 6, 2006
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    Silence alone is. Nothing can be said about this poem.

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