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Seen... through

Invisible
 a feeling...

A path
 dead end ahead...

Once again
 back to square one...

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Written July 5th, 2006

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  • transcendental baby gold member
    July 5, 2006
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    If there's a dead end on that path ... maybe there will be a brighter one on the next ... and you won't disappear into that invisible feeling by stopping where you're at ... but that end sounds hopeful ... you're back at the starting gate ... but your there and there is nowhere to go but forward