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I Hate You

I hate you.....you're always lying to me.
Why do you think you're so wonderful?
You have this power to make me do whatever you say....
You have this power to make we stay.
Sometimes I want to kill you....
at other times I want to just slp you.
Why do you do this to me?
I just don't understand you.
Everything I do never matters to you.
When I do something wrong....it's the end of the world.
When you do something wrong....you just call it a "one-little mistake"
I have no clue what I'm doing here....crying over you.
I hate the way you make me feel ......and most of all



I HATE YOU........................

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Do-not ask......this is what happens when "you" piss me off!!!
Written July 5th, 2006

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  • poeticweaver gold member
    July 6, 2006
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    This is sad, and you deserve happiness here in a loving relationship, if you can't get it here, in this one, and you are trying, and it is one sided, then I'd say life is to short, see ya....

    These lines speak alot on what is going on

    I just don't understand you.
    Everything I do never matters to you.
    When I do something wrong....it's the end of the world.
    When you do something wrong....you just call it a "one-little mistake"

    That's not the way things should be, you having all the blame, and him letting himself off the hook..

    You take care of yourself, just my thoughts here.
    Much love sweet soul!

    -Timothy

  • loveandpainRthesame
    July 5, 2006
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    Great emotion. I love it