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BreakDown

You blame it on
  my fragile heart.
Pick up the pieces,
     stand around,
       pretend you care.
Catch the tears
   streaming down my cheeks.
         Hide them away,
   so no one knows you're
       S H A L L O W.
I knew you from the
     start,
      I've known a million guys
           like you.
  I picked you out
       with just one glance,
  just like every other
        guy,
     trying to get in
 my pants.
   And Ill forever
      blame you
  for this BREAKDOWN.

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Written July 5th, 2006

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  • withoutlove13
    July 20, 2006
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    amazing, its sad but it helps people understand how your feeling. stacy baby! have you ever ridden by where skate america was? well they've got a whole entirley new biulding up , when i see it it makes me cry i miss everyone Xspecially you

    crystal


  • Question
    July 6, 2006
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    lets see... what state you live in again? I'll have to fly out there and kill him... great write stac, keep it up. I'm here if you ever need to talk.
    -Joe


  • Quetzalcoatl
    July 6, 2006
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    gah, i hate people like this, for even though they inspire great writes such as your piece here, they hurt my friends- not cool. lemme at him stac, pleeeeeeeeeeeease?


  • LemonDropAngel
    July 6, 2006
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    i like the poem its great...sad but great...hope you are doing ok
    xoxo
    Tori
    Edited on Jul 06, 10:07 because ''.


  • DarlingStac
    July 5, 2006
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    Yep
    Its about him...


  • mysticlabyrinth
    July 5, 2006
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    i like this! is it about who i think its about???


  • Painted Warrior
    July 5, 2006
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    Great write... The pain comes threw loud and clear.

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