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Broken Heart

Well now I know the truth
Guess this was how it's meant to be
I now have 100% proof
I don't think you ever loved me

You lied to me time and again
Did you think I'd never find out??
I hope she's a good f-k friend
I know now what you're all about

I never saw it
The way you really are
The light was never fully lit
You're no longer my shining star

I found out a lot of shit today
I actually cried for you AGAIN!!!!
Maybe my family was right
I can't believe you hurt me AGAIN!!!

Why do you forever lie to me???
It doesn't make sense!
I hope you're really happy
I think it's time for me to move on

You lied
You cheated
I begged
And even pleaded
I never thought you'd do this though
I never thought you'd actually
BREAK MY F-KIN HEART!!!!!!!!!!!

Author notes

Guys piss me the f-k off!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Written March 28th, 2003

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  • Stephibaby06
    August 18, 2003
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    hmmmm...perfect one's are out there...but you always seem to hit the cheating and lying one's on the way. Don't worry...one day.
    Great write
    Thanks for sharing

    ~steph~


  • letterstoladypeace
    March 29, 2003
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    This was ok. You really let out your emotions, and how you feel about guys. Personally, there are some parts that I think you were trying to hard to rhyme, but that's the only reason why I think its only "ok". Other than that, it was overall good.

  • BigDaddy
    March 28, 2003
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    LOVE IT

    hhmmmm on behalf of all decent guys I appologize, I am however very impressed with this write as I know exactly how you feel you see it works in opposition too you know, keep up the good work emotion is the key to good writing..


  • deadrose
    March 28, 2003
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    good

    yeah guys suck,almost all of them are jerks!
    good write
    thanks for sharing