^ Dear little
lamb who is your
shepherd? And the one who
knows and keeps a record? Can he show
you the stars at night? Or only guide to keep you from fright.
Wanting to know about the designer’s secret.
And perk up your wooly ears to hear it. With practice
comes skill to succeed. Then your dreams will soon
be realized indeed. So you quickly peer over another
shoulder to see where others are only grazing merrily.
The treasures you want are not hard to explain but then
again we must first have a plan to attain. What is your
desire to accomplish in art? Or is it grammar and
rhyme just for a start? Will you speak your Baa
Baa instead of good? The words to teach are they
mis- understood? Oh little lamb, there is still
so much to learn. You have set your
one goal & from it don’t turn.
A path in life a bit different
not of the norm. Now you
are to decide and
can choose a
form.
Author notes
Give me an inch - I'll give you a figural!
Written July 5th, 2006
A contest entry
- A reason to live by Blue Azure.
1050 points, ended July 11, 2007, 28 entries
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Wow shape poetry is hard to read lol but this is pretty cool :]
Thank you for entering my contest Good luck
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I liked this it was a great piece of shape poetry and really looks great, you did a great job on the poem and it really flows and shows your message perfectly. Great job and please keep it up.
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best piece of shape poetry i've seen...really great. however i personally found the shape distracting a little. but overall a good piece. thanks for sharing and entering.
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HERE ARE 2''
THIS LAMB HAD TO PE PUT THERE FOR ME OR DID YOU KNOW I COLLECTED THEM ALONG WITH EBOUT EVERY OTHER ODD LITTLE WHAT EVER I FEAR NOBODY WILL COLLECT.MC HEADLE FRIEND -
wonderful poem and wonder art
i love it!!! and the lamb
Good luck
~Mira
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Tang, this is very good. I'm a little partial on spiritual poems. I defiently like the way who told your story in the shape of a lamb. -
Dear Tam,
I do enjoy creating animals, working them into figural poems.
So glad you are enjoying the visual as well as the poetry.
Tang -
MINDBLOWING!
WOW! Tang, I am impressed. The shape is mindblowing but your words are just as stunning! My Goodness.....this is amazing.
You have a real talent here. I'm going to read more of your work. EXCELLENT! Blessings! Tammy -
Dear LittleAnn,
Thanks for enjoying my figural poem & for the wonderful compliments.
Tang -
This was really cool... Fantastic work - those figural poems are great! Keep up the great work!
LittleAnn
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Dear Lady Stone,
Yep! I do love creating the figural poems.
I thought this one turned our pretty well!
Thanks again!
Tang -
awesome.. these are great.. they trully take an imaganitive talent for word placement.. good luck to you in the contest!
much luv-
Krystal
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Aw! Thank you so much for entering! But even more for dedicating this to me!
I truly appreciate it! I applaud you for entering!
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Dear wakingdevil,
You're just jealous that I didn't do one with you as a goat! lol
Thanks - kinda!
Tang -
I prefer your other ones.You'll have better chances of winning with them.(I'm judging on the figural)This looks kind of distorted.YOu have better ones
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Dear WolfHeart,
Thanks the figurals are my favorite to create.
DarkChildsKiss is in search of somehow learning how to do them, I just predraw out what I'm trying for then start tinking away!
But the finished product always looks different!
I've got almost 50 figurals now!
Tang -
Oh, my, I have never seen one of these before. I admire you very much. It must be very difficult. Thans for teaching me about this form, I might try it. hugs WolfHeart
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