Hello Y'all
My name is Paul
I live out here
In these here wood
But I'm nothing like
Ol' Robin Hood
See, I'm more like
Dr. Hannibal Lecter
I love that blood,
That good sweet nectar
Step on into
My humble abode
I'll go into
A deadly mode
Watch you're step
Don't know while I'll strike
Beef and brain
Are not unlike
I'll chop you up
With my buck knife
Jab your stomach,
End your life
I'll drag you up
Onto this marble top
Take out my butcher knife
Chop chop chop!
I'll pull out your heart,
Your brain and your liver
I'm so excited
Did I just quiver?
I'll add in some salt,
Just for some taste
In this pot
You'll be placed!
Put on high
To bubble and boil
I'll eat you tonight
Wouldn't want you to spoil
You taste quite good
But this I knew
Oh how I love
Home cooked brain stew
Author notes
Wow, this was definitely kinda morbid! But I enjoyed writing it (is that a bad thing?) I just watched Red Dragon and Silence of the Lambs last night, so I think that's where this came from (well duh, the reference to Dr. Lecter!)
Written July 5th, 2006
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OH! Veronica made a spelling error. It says "you're" and it should be "your" xD Sorry, I have to point that out. This is really cute though. Nice beat to it. Made me smile.
Love always,
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Great beat! This really made me think of ICP, I'm sure you know 'em... I really liked it. Made for a nice kind of EW thinking! Very creative!
All the best!
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What a wild trip! It was creepy, visual, and terribly disturbing. I LOVED IT! You have a very creative flare, and you have the gift of painting pictures with your words. Hannibal Lector would be very pleased.
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that was great,I wish I could just come up with stuff like that.
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creepy! i didnt expect this kind of poetry until october! (halloween hehe) but i like it-- gave me chills *shivers*
you were very creative and i'm glad you entered. thanks and good luck
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xD Lmfao... I loved this..
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jesus christ......COOLI YO YO! this was creepy, disgusting, and just lovely, i liked and and i will never ever ever forgoet it, i can promise you that....anyway, i shall be off now....call me!
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I can see fingers and toes floating around with the entrails and onion slices...That's all you need to add!...You do use onion, don't you?...AND mushrooms!...Lots of mushrooms! that's it!... Nothing else!...EXCEPT...maybe some of those fantastic little new potatos...I love those new potatos!...Did I leave out the "e" again...I meant potatoes! Nothing else! Anythang else would ruin it!...Except .....maybe some of those wonderful little crunchy baby carrots! Yeah! I love those!...and Bell peppers! fantastic!!! ... Just like my momma used to make! Reminds me of the time we had dinner one night and invited over all the neighbors for stew! Man! It was soooooo good! Wasn't long before it was all gone! EVERYTHANG! EXCEPT....for the toes! Nobody would eat the toes! I tried one...nope! No toes for me! Now, fingers! I tried a finger or two! Not bad...not bad at all! ...Love it! Very good write!...Bon Ton Ron
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