A slient Goodbye
A song for the night
The long warm kisses
The lonely heart misses
Pressing on my lips
Holding in my arms
Hallow Empty now
Sadness grows somehow
Goodbye, goodbye
Fade into the light
Let me preserve you
Beautiful memories
Let's go out tonight
Spread your ashes
Over the ocean tides
Could I hold on to
One last moment of you
Those worldly things
Back to nothingness
Memories and memories
Reminiscent is useless
Barely counted for
The first drop of tear
Hidden for strength
Throw it all away
Author notes
3 "I miss you my love."
Written July 5th, 2006
A contest entry
- Anything and Everything in the Stars by Sam-I-Am.
300 points, ended September 24, 2006, 18 entries
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Excellent write
I really enjoyed reading this poem it held me from begining to end.I also love your style of writing and will be back to read more of your work Take care,Moon Shadow. Please accept my applaude. -
Beautiful and flowing. teh sadness in this is very empathic. Well done, and good luck.
Sapphire -
Very good!
Such fluency as in your peom is rarely seen....amazingly written.....I enjoyed it!!!
Love,
Shuvi -
a smooth flowing spasmodic ripping of the heart into the flames of misery which burn the sweet memories reminiscent of those moments shared dared compared in the sublime confines of each others arms charms and now ..harms..a wonderful poem if there was one...beauty in despair Shubs
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This was a very well written poem which I liked a lot. Keep writing, this was a very poignant poem.
Best wishes,
Pozo
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Absolutley lovely! It flowed beautifully. So sad yet hopeful. Powerful words and beautiful emotion combined to create an inspiring poem. Good luck in the contest.
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