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Plowed pavement

Cut through the mountains
Paved so I can get to you
Plowed I get there fast

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Written July 5th, 2006

A contest entry

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  • Azume
    July 5, 2006
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    I love the picture and the haiku you did was nice.Unfortunetly I have to DQ you because you did not read the rules properly.
    Thanks though for entering,
    ~*Azume