Someone come save me
From the pain that's inside
Someone come save me
Before I commit Suicide
I'm lost in Darkness
And there's no way out
I will surely go insane
There is no doubt
In a dark room
With no where to run
I'm not gonna wake up
To the brightness of the sun
Because I'll be dead
Before the birds start to sing
Oh how much relieve
To my soul this will bring
Then my soul will leave my body
And go where its destine to
I will have no more depression
Or sadness to live though
Every single day
I have pain
Every single day
It's all the same
Every night the same thing happens
Go to bed crying
Think of things
Just wish I was dieing
Wake up
With sadness in my heart
Because I know today
My world will fall apart
Why can't pain
Just leave me be
Or is happiness
Something it doesn't want me to see?
Why can't I just have
Some good days
god it seems
Like I'm in one big maze
There's no way out
Keep reaching a dead end
No where to turn
Not even to a simple friend
Shh...Get quite
Whats that I hear?
OH NO! It's coming
My Biggest, Deepest, Darkest fear
Depression! It just struck me
It hit me way deep down
Just want to collapse
And hit the ground
I have a question
For everyone
Because soon the birds will sing
And out will come the sun
I'm about to take my life
And my question is why?
Why did this happen to me?
You don't know how I tried
I'm about to hang myself
And cut off my air supply
So this is my last and final
Good-bye..............
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Written July 5th, 2006
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- Dark Poems by deathbysaddness.
300 points, ended July 29, 2006, 12 entries
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another well expressed poem. I found reading uplifting poems and writing my poems helped with my depression to get better, and now I am stable. I think I just go through mild depression not anymore of Bipolar Disorder.
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you know i have written a couple of poems very similar especially the last 2 lines...it's sorta freaking me out...though im still enjoying every one of ya poems
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WOW i can really relate to that becuase i just fell that way all the time im me sometimes or look at my home page i love ur peices
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Don't give up.Never give up. It takes more courage to live than to take your life. Suicide is the easy way out. You have to stay alive. You have to keep fighting. That's what I did, and now I'm out of my depression.I was in a depression for three whole years,and I got out.You just have to keep fighting.I can completely relate to how you feel in this poem.If you ever need someone to talk to,feel free to IM me.
FallenPoeticAngel
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hey another sad poem. if u ever need to talk or need a friend im here. ill always listen and try to help. i know wat its like to be depressed and want to end it all. keep writin and keep living...no matter how bad things get, they will get better one day
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