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My Final Words

My hopes shatter
Just like my dreams
My whole life's going down hill
Is how this seems

Everyday it gets worse
So it will never get better
And I know one day
I'll write my suicide letter

And say good-bye
To everyone I know
Oh how this feeling
is beginning to grow

Remember me as I was
Not what I be came
Just put that old child picture
In that broken frame

And cry those tears
I cried every night
Because no one knew
I wasn't alright

Don't grieve that I'm gone
I wanted to die
I didn't want anymore
Scars upon my thigh

So there was only one way
And that way was suicide
For that was the only way
I felt that inside

I'm done now
Here no more
I just wanted to let
My soul soar

For it wasn't happy
For the life it was given
And to kill it's carrier
That's how it was driven

So I'm doing it now
I couldn't wait
For I truly believe
This was my fate

I wanted to stay here
I really truly did
But there was only one way
The depression I could get rid

Therapy..Rehab
Nothing helped at all
So now I shall give
Death my sweet call

So bye world
You were hell and I meant nothing
I was just put here
To go though the suffering

These are my last breathes
These are my last words
I just hope
That they will be heard

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Written July 5th, 2006

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  • JustAflashOfFiction
    October 25, 2006
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    WOW. I dont even know what to say. You have looked into my life and written it here on AP. I know all those feelings, as I mentioned before. You are very talented. Good work


  • Beautifully Poetic
    September 6, 2006
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    i really relate to everything your writing so far...it's so gud! Keep it up you have a beautiful talent of twisting your feeling and words into so much more and meaningful! loving your work

  • SorrowLaBelle
    July 29, 2006
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    It seems like a bit of a rage poem to me.. I like it tho. You can picture it as if its truly happening to you. p.s I could never write love poems. Lol


  • Faerie.Princess
    July 5, 2006
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    wow..a very emotional piece...u need to fix the last line. i think its mean to be heard not head. other than that his poem was great. i could really understand what your are going through while reading this. i hope that you dont commit suicide and that things get better and happier for you. keep writin