Arms,
open
wide take me
through the storms that
lie always in my
mind. Lead me there, to your
haven, and let me shelter
myself in the comfort of your
heart. Grasp my hand, guide me, and I will
follow you wherever you may take me.
Author notes
Written July 5th, 2006
In a list
A contest entry
- Let's Write Etherees Picture Competition II by ShelleyA.
300 points, ended July 13, 2006, 6 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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A lovely write. Strong assonance. Good alliteration. Beautiful imagery and lovely flow. Excellent descriptives and tone. Lovely expression of feeling. Your faith hines through in this piece. Thank you for your entry. Shelley
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Thank you for the comments, much appreciated.
Storm -
Very beautiful, it shows your faith in Him and trust in Him. Incredible! This is all we need to live life and do the right things. I am glad you are on the right path. You have maintained the syllable count well. Excellent imagery and good word choice. Good use of assonance. May the best come to you.
All the best,
Charishma
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Thank you, appreciate your comments.
Storm -
I love the way you put the storm in the mind... great analogy.
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I think we all do in some way or another. But you've seen some of why I do. Thanks for reading hun. Appreciate it.
Storm -
seems you read my mind and dreams too there my dear.
i hunger for peace of mind too -
Thank you dear friend. I appreciate your comments.
Autumn -
I love you Autumn! beautiful write here dear friend! So easy to feel so lost, when hope is there all along! I really enjoyed reading this poet! much love, and best of luck! john
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