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A w e s o m e

I need to feel the sun on both sides,
I need to see the highs and lows of the sea's tides.

I need to hear the wind's whisper,
I need to taste both sweet and bitter.

I need to smell the scent of lavender,
And I need to live like a mild predator.

But I want nothing more than you by my side,
To follow, parallel and go ahead of my strides.

To the past, present and my future life,
I hope you are there always by my side.

Author notes

ha! i reckon this is a really cheesy poem but i made it so there is that natural biased feeling of me liking it ... and i hope u do too
Written July 4th, 2006

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  • ferret21
    July 4, 2006
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    hey thanx for the comment


  • FallingTwilight
    July 4, 2006
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    I like it. The rhyming seems a bit forced, but other than that it's nice.Thank you for sharing.

    Great write,keep writing,

    FallenPoeticAngel