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Lost Twin

Where are you?
The other half of me
I’m standing here all alone
Alone in despair and pain
how will I survive without you?
I’ve lost my twin, half of me

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for jo
Written July 4th, 2006

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  • BadExample
    July 4, 2006
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    its about my best friend from highschool and how i went away to college and she stayed behind, her life went to hell and i was left alone...thanks for the review...
    Edited on Jul 04, 11:15 p.m. because ''.


  • Methusala
    July 4, 2006
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    this is a sad piece. Is this person really your twin or are they your "better" half, so to speak? just wondering. and good job here

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