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Overwhelming Love (Part II - We survived)




Epiphany's flow
Effortlessly through liquid emotions..
Finding a way to the surface,
So I can breathe again..
I no longer drown
In this overwhelming love,
But float with you
Safe in your embrace.

And as my eyes open
I realise it's all a dream..
A dream wished upon every star,
The dream that I need so badly to come true..

I surround myself with peace,
But only you can provide
The pure tranquility
To calm my racing heart..

Back and forth,
Emotions pulsate,
Changing pace faster than my heart rate.

And at the end,
Bruised and battered..
We survived..

We survived the rapids,
The rocks, the waterfall..
Clinging desperately to the remnants
Of our almost lost love,
We survived..

Through all the ups and downs,
Though not always strong,
Not always a unit..
We survived..


Without each other,
We only crumble..
And any strength we find,
Discovered later to be fake,
Just our minds blocking out memories..
Telling us we can be strong on our own..

Telling me that I am strong,
Even on my own..

But without him, Who am I?

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Sequal to: allpoetry.com/Poem/1980087

Written July 4th, 2006

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  • Kevo MF Last
    July 5, 2006
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    wow... HOnestly, im at a loss of words I could go on about the parts tha Iliked, or the unique tone to it all, but I would rather just tell you that I love you as we float upon the surface of this love we share... always keep floating, despite the water logged flesh and sun burned faces, we will stay strong, only held toghether by a hand, we are strong...

    I love you

    ~Your Kevin~