I wander this forbidden garden,
The flowers tainted red by the garnet stone,
And the blood that falls from my hands
When I hoist up this monument
In my paradise of illusions.
I wander these shining stairs
That seem to lead me into the sky.
The door that leads me to my dreams
Of rose gardens and freedom,
In my paradise of illusions.
I wander this misty labyrinth,
Past the blood-red roses
And the knotted crosses,
Following the force that leads me,
Trying to escape from
My paradise of illusions.
Author notes
"La Fleurs sur la niege"
OHMYGOD I WROTE A POEM! Based on the Malice Mizer song 'Garnet ~Kindan no Sono e~'. I wanted to write a poem along these lines for a looooong time but every time I tried it didn't come out right/I never finished it. But now I have! So rejoice. Now I gotta go shower. >>;
Written July 4th, 2006
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Yaaay. Thank you. ^^
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So pretty Mana, I love it. So 10x's better then I can do.
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Hooray! Thank you. ^^ I don't know what the Poor Jesus thing was about. Maybe it was an inside joke from before and I can't remember it now. XD
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HOLY CRAP! You wrote a poem?! You should more often, well I'm not going to make you or anything...but yeah, I enjoyed this poem a lot, and at the end I was like, "woah, Michaela wrote this." Woot woot...poor Jesus?
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I like this poem a lot especially the beginning.
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Ah, thank you. ^^
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Well I hadnt read some of your work in a while so i did. This is really good I really liked how the last line always repeated it gave the poem an eerie rythem.
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Tee hee. I wonder where you got this idea for THIS poem?
but yeah. Awww. Poor Jesus. Gud stuff.
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wow..MM!!!! nice one mana
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AH MALICE MIZER.
I felt really happy when I saw the title because Malice Mizer fans are uncommon here.
And as for the poem, I can really see the connection to Garnet. I like the vision of roses that you gave in oyur poem, that wasn't really drawn upon in the song itself. Good luck in the contest!
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Wow... the depth in this piece is amazing... A nice read. Best of luck in the contest -- Starlit Kisses
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OoOoh... yay
I saw this and I was like "Michaela wrote a poem
" lol... and got all super excited-y. This is really awesome. I love the phrase knotted crosses. It sounds so cool and... diabolical. Which is kinda weird of me to think. But whatever. And paradise of illusions is pretty sa~weet too.
Luffly!
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Yay! Thanks. ^-^;
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Yay ya I read the title and I thought "OOoh Garnet, must be good if she's basing it on Malice Mizer!" but ya it was totally awesome, glad you finally got it right or whatever, this is awesome
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