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Secrets

Everyone sees her
As a perfect little thing
But really shes trapped
With a beautiful body

People don't see her pain
Her scars
Her tears at night
Her thoughts

No-one sees what she does to herself
They think her skin is so smooth
Her hair is perfect
And that she has the best body

No-one knows what shes does to get that perfect body
She eats then gets sick
Over and over
Till she gets to the right weight

One day she will die from it
But no-one will know why
They don't know what happens to her
When they all expect everything from her

They expect so much
They want so much from her
She cant handle it no more
She finally snapped

When she turned to her "friends"
She found out they wern't really friends
They turned there back
They made rumors about her

They made the school hate her
Cause she asked for help
Why is it so hard for her
To get the help she needs

That's what people don't see
Is the pain she holds
The secrets she keeps
To this day

They will never know
What they did to her
She ran away
Never to return again



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Written July 4th, 2006

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  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    September 8, 2007

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    This is a very nice but a very sad write.I can realte to the feelings though thank you for shairng and goodluck to you in the contest.Best Wishes


  • She burns
    September 13, 2006
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    So sad and very touching,this is a like a story of teens who suffer everyday,at school at everyday and everything,It's just so sad...