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I Can Still Recall...

I can still recall the sound of the ocean
as the waves climbed their way
up the endless expanse of perfect golden sand,
the ocean reaching out for anyone
whose toes would embrace
the sensation...

I can still recall the sight of the sky
as the sun went down to rest
pulling every colour
and every ray of light along with it,
setting up the most spectacular tableau -
delicate and breathtaking -
and I remember savouring every glance
as time would always steal it away
too soon...

And I can still recall the moment we shared
when our eyes locked, and we connected;
It is said that the eyes
are the gateway to the soul
and in this moment,
I have found this to be true
for I know, you have seen my soul
and I have seen yours

and I still remember the smile we shared
and the words you spoke

and the way they changed my life...



Author notes

Personally, this is what I found when writing this:

Had an idea, started to write, kept going, got impatient, and finished it...

I apologize if it feels like a downhill read! How about a hug to make up for it?



Good night


Written July 4th, 2006

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  • Nomadic Prince
    April 5, 2007

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    When I read this I am reminded of le Count de Monte Cristo, it seams that it would have been a thought that would cross his mind. Very lovely.
    NP


  • GorgeouslyBroken
    September 15, 2006
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    Christine its great! I love it! The saying the eyes are the gatway to the soul are so true! I have to write that one down! great write...yo should read the two new ones I have put up! YEY!
    love you~Jamie
    Edited on Sep 15, 10:08 p.m. because 'oops wrong word!'.

  • -Christine-
    July 4, 2006
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    Fiona!!
    Thank you berry berry much!
    Well, talk to ya later,


  • Neon Lights
    July 4, 2006
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    YAY!! Christine has written something. And my darling sister it is as always spectacular. I missed reading your work my dear. I love your description in this I can actuallly visualize everything you are saying. Wonderful my dear!!
    Much love,
    ~Fiona~

  • -Christine-
    July 4, 2006
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    I haven't, I know! And I usually post everything I write, so you can see how little I've written lately. It's been like...months!

    But I miss the feeling of it...so yep, I decided to let something out.

    Thanks for the comment Britt, you should really write about your soap opera life! It is quite the emotional ride it seems!

    Well..have a good summer!


  • Its-Deja-Vu
    July 4, 2006
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    you havent put that much stuff on here lately. glad to read some finally, yeah. shmah... put more stuff on man. jeez... maybe i should too. havent written anything for like a week.. gah.. but i will probibly.. yeah yeah! writing about my soap operas of life!! yeah yeah! so yeah. put more stuff on. even if it turns out shitty, which is very unlikely...but yeah.
    there is clean laundry i have to put away
    so ttyl vuv u lots
    `britt`

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