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Go away!

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Why are you looking at me like that?
You make me nervous! Go away!
Do I look strange! have a wart on my nose?
What do you mean? I don’t have a face!
I look nervous? Well! wouldn’t you?
If someone looked at you wierd!
Come on! Gimme a break! Get outta here!
Hey! Leave my glasses alone! I can’t see!
BOING BOING BOING
Whatcha lookin at?
Haven’t you seen eyes bounce before?

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Just a bit of silliness.  Can't help myself!
Written July 4th, 2006

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  • Jade Benecke
    May 9, 2008
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    Hello Aunty Julie its me Jade ur niece. i love the poem u wrote or wateva that poem is


  • October 12, 2006
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    quite an eye catcher?

    Oh my eyes bounce every time they follow the wife or a young lady passing me by? They often have something in them too? Yes its’ the Wife?

    You ladies make a mans eyes pop bounce roll and so much more, hence the thought for this humorous treat from you likely came quite natural to your good self, especially being a lady? I’ll have to use those thoughts for another poem. See now you’re inspiring me too?


  • eternalpoet
    August 22, 2006
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    3 Stars ***

    Hello jenni, My Pluff Pluff Spongey Doll ... the place where i lived was flooded with heavy rainfall and storms, due to which my net crashed down... thats why i could not really come online.

    Anyways, you should never let go of your super funny nature .. *tries to bounce his eye like that in the pic* ... very funny poem.. thanks for sharing

    *hugs and kisses*

    take cares and have a nice time my dear friend.. just keep it up ... your humble little friend... ... ... ... - Vic ( who else? )


  • Janice M Pickett
    July 15, 2006
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    Oh This is great and funny. It must be doing you good living further down the line from us all.LOL
    You are a funny lady.


    Jan


  • angelica silver member
    July 5, 2006
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    Dear Jen, HAHAHA You have such a funny sense of humour, this certainly is a bit of silliness, but we need them to help cope with all the sadness in the world today.I enjoyed reading it.
    Joan


  • hugh wyles silver member
    July 5, 2006
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    Dear Jenelda,
    Well, I don't think I have ever seen eyes 'bounce'! I remember a guy in muy class at primary school who could get his eyes to 'look at each other' and that was hideous! He made himself so crosseyed that I couldn't bear to look at him and now, 67 years later, I can still see him in my mind's eye and shudder! Don't know what became of him and can't even remember his name but there you are! He left an impression!
    ......of course you've got a face!! You have one of the nicest faces I know and such a cute nose! Who is this person saying these things? ....and I your big open eyes!!
    When Edna borrows my glasses at a restaurant ('coz she's forgotten toi take her own), I can't see a thing, so I know what you mean.....
    Well, you said your poem was a bit of silliness so this is a silly comment in return. I meant to comment yesterday but got sidetracked and only just remembered I hadn't come back. Sorry!
    Applause, love and hugs, XXX Hugh.

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