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Spring

When I look outside,
I can't believe spring is here.
The snow is gone,
The grass and flowers are in bloom.
Instead of hearing quiet,
I hear the chirping sounds of the morning birds.
It's so hard to believe,
IT'S SPRING AGAIN!!

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Written March 27th, 2003

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  • phatalvision silver member
    April 19, 2003
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    Spring in Wisconsin is a joke! We can't trust April. We've had many a white Easter. A few years back we had 6 inches of snow on May 10th!! I'll put the snow shovel away in June.


  • hartofsilver
    April 8, 2003
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    yay, i'm glad spring is here too got rid of my winter coat for a while, walking home in a light sweat shirt and T-shirt, feels so lovely out, and smells and sounds so amazing. i don't realize how much i miss the birds chirping till spring comes again and i can hear it again.

    thanx by the way for your comment. much appreciated

    kayla*
    Edited on Apr 08, 9:41 p.m. because ''.


  • Rodney
    April 1, 2003
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    Aaah, the renewal that comes with spring. All the sights, sounds and color return.
    Very cool piece. Nice and relaxing.
    Thanx for sharing.
    Rodney

  • Eagleseye
    March 31, 2003
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    I know!! Isn't it so beautiful outside?? It's like everything is back to life and everybody is more happy now. Spring is the best season of them all. For me it's easy to believe because I live to see Spring and it always comes hehe. Nice write.

  • beloved hate
    March 29, 2003
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    haha I love Spring, too! The winter seems sooo long and then finally, spring gets here and the whole world seems brand new!

    Very cute poem, I like
    luv
    bebe

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