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Miles Away...

Miles away...
Love isn't forgotten.
Tears from the heart
Never will appear.
Light or dark,
Day or night,
Pain is still here,
and happiness is awaiting.
Come home,
Safe and quick,
But remember our promises,
For our Love cannot be broken

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Written March 27th, 2003

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  • VanyaVilya
    April 8, 2003
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    Great poem. I really loved it. Lots of emotion. I loved every line of it and thank you for your wonderful comment on my poem. Thx!
    ~ash~

  • Eagleseye
    March 31, 2003
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    But remember our promises,
    For our Love cannot be broken --- very strong line there.
    True love should never be broken. I love the way your poems are short but they all have a good point to them. I wish you all the best on AP. Nice job!