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Perfect You

When I look at you,
All I can see is, love.
You are so special.
And only through my eyes,
Are you Perfect.

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Written March 27th, 2003

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  • Eagleseye
    March 31, 2003
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    Thank you for your kind comment on my poem.
    This is very sweet, yeah that's what happens when you
    love somebody. You know they are perfect for you and
    what somebody else thinks doesn't really matter.
    Love is the greatest feeling. Keep writing.

  • FriendlyPanther
    March 31, 2003
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    Sweet!

    Wow, very beautiful It's a short write but very sweet I loved it! Thanks for sharing

    James