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A Picture of Thoughts

I look into your eyes,
And what do I see?
But a young boy,
Staring back at me.

I look into your eyes,
And what do I see?
But love and fear,
Wrapped all into one.

Now I've seen it all,
So if you'll look into my eyes,
Here is what you will see.

You'll look into my eyes,
And here's what you'll see.
But a young girl,
Staring back at you.

You'll look into my eyes,
And here's what you'll see.
But all my love,
Searching for your heart.

So as we stare,
Into one another's eyes,
We will soon find,
The love we'll always share

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Written March 27th, 2003

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  • velveteen
    July 22, 2004
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    This is beautiful! This is so honest, and I really love eyes, so you know... Anyway, keep up the work, and thank you for commenting on The One.
    God bless you,
    ~~~~~Crosseyed387 ~~~~~


  • rufina caraid gold member
    April 3, 2003
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    Sweet poem Staci - keep looking into those eyes. they will speak volumes!!!
    ~Von~

  • FriendlyPanther
    March 31, 2003
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    Beautiful!

    This is such a sweet poem Very beautiful and touching write! You express your emotions so well in your poems, it really draws me in! Very well done I love reading these kind of poems instead of all the ones on heartache and strife. Excellent work Keep it up alright? *Hugs*

    James


  • Bigmammajen
    March 27, 2003
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    well, eyes are pretty much the only way to see the real truth in people. sometimes you can tell alot more about someone who never says a word, just by looking into their eyes, than someone who tells you all about their life.....because its the life they dont tell you about, that they hide within

    does that make sense or do I need sleep? :S