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Face lifts here
Tummy tucks there
Enlarged boobs
We are aware
Plastic Barbie dolls
We all will be
By the turn of the next century
And having thick lipo lips
Now that really is a disgrace
Made to look 30 years younger
Honestly, could you face ?
Perhaps I am just  old fashioned
I don’t like to be a cynic
So could you lend me 10,000 bucks
I want to book into the clinic.

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Written July 3rd, 2006

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  • little-hug
    July 5, 2006
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    umm I'm not sure I understand this but I think that you don't need to look in a mirror to tell you how old you are. I don't think that matters (at least not to me.. I don't think you need to look at a piece of paper to tell you how old you are. I don't think that matter either (well it doesn't to me).. I think it is whats inside that counts. Thats what everyone always tells me sometimes when I am playing blocks with Daniel I feel like I am 2 years old again because it is so much fun and I know I probably look silly playing with blocks now that I am 10 but I don't care I like playing them with my little brother even if I look silly sorry I think I'm rambling now .. um Even though I'm not sure I understand the poem I bet its funny and great because its in the humor category
    lots of love
    ellie

  • Libra
    July 4, 2006
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    Yep lovey I think the time is getting closer, ..gravity taking over.And whats all this about viagra....naaaa... go and have a transplant but you will have to have a walking stick to adjust your limp .


  • July 4, 2006
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    terrific

    Wow wicked painted ladies and all. Bring them on the boob jobs and face lifts. I'll buy me a bottle of viagra-- This poem really very humourous and very very true. It certainly speaks volumes about our generation. Uplifting descriptive and very funny. Terrific!


  • princesspaige
    July 3, 2006
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    lol that was kool, keep up the great work! well done!


  • Truthful Princess
    July 3, 2006
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    Awesome

    Haha That was a great ending! It was defentily unexpected! I loved it! What you said in that poem is also very true! The worlds not going to change though so I quess we just have to deal with it.

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