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untitled pop ditty

Skipping along on a Sunday evening ice cream run
You're on your own
Out on the town in your prettiest gown you know
You're all alone

Where is he now?
I know he must be around
And you know I would be there
Do I wish I was him?
Do I know it's a sin?




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Written July 3rd, 2006

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  • jaws theme song
    July 3, 2006
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    I like the way it starts out with the ice cream run all alone. pretty.